You can watch my elevator pitch 2 here:
https://drive.google.com/file/d/1JkYKyp06ou_iV5CZ3jwvjhGEPtjU9ADA/view?usp=sharing
Based on the feedback that I received, I made it shorter and more concise. My peers told me that I caused a good impression and that it was pretty clear. So this time I only focused on doing it more engaging with the audience, I decided to focus my audience on the firms this time, instead of the international students. My program needs to be sold to international students and also to the companies that are looking for an international workforce. I would like to thank my other virtual classmates for all the feedback that they provided me.
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Final Reflection
Sadly, this will be my last post as I have learned a lot from this class. It has been an amazing opportunity to learn from the assignments...
Hi Gerardo, I really like how the elevator pitch was structured. I like how you throw the problem first and allow the audience to try to come up with a solution, but you easily have much to say about the solution. I can see your compassion to help other students that are facing similar dilemmas as it seems like a genuine concern for you that you won’t stop until you harbor a solution.
ReplyDeleteHey Gerardo, I think that you had a ton of great points! I can tell that you are very passionate about what you saying. Passion is incredibly important when it comes to a business. My only critique would be for you to have a little more energy. This will help keep the audience engaged in your presentation. Overall, I liked your pitch.
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